The story of an unfortunate school boy, who tries to find an ingenious way to shake off the bully who has been tormenting him and, at the same time, keep his girlfriend.
I repeat my last comment saying "i think that the story is original, different that other ones, but i like" but now with the blogger name of Miguel Segurola.
didnt't like this story because it is so long and boring. But it is easy to read. i recomended for people that like the misterius The new vocabulary: - Grinned - Mop - Jogg
Nice story dear writer :D but i think you write too many stories and u may choose one and try to improve it. If you like to write storyes u may spend a lot of time writing and doing better stories if u want to be the best... They are not bad but... They are short, But acceptable.
Nice story dear writer :D but i think you write too many stories and u may choose one and try to improve it. If you like to write storyes u may spend a lot of time writing and doing better stories if u want to be the best... They are not bad but... They are short, But acceptable.
I like this story because is entertaining and I have not bored reading this story.
The story start describing the situation and that is great, but the part that I like more is the conflict. I like the story because I like how is desarrollated the conflict.
I recommend this sotry to the childrens and teenagers beteween 10-14. That's why I feel identified with Tim
Besides that, I learn news expresions and words in English, for example:(Crankshaft, crackpot, mumps, dizzy...)
i have read the story and it is very interesting but is a bit large so it is like more difficult to read it but i recommend you to read his story because this doesn't happen only in this case there are a lot of more cases but this is very hard.
It is too long in my opinion, but it gives lots of details and that make very interesting the time you're reading it. I enjoyed it. New words: grinned, gnomish, grubby
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the story, but is a little bit large.
ReplyDeleteIt is VERY LARGE.... But I like this story, it is vey intense and with reality
ReplyDeletefor me this story is good because it describes people who can easily be real and because the story is very interesting.
ReplyDeleteThis story is very interesting, because, speak about life of one person.
ReplyDeleteI liked this story but on my opinion is so long
ReplyDeleteI realy enjoyed this story because it is very crazy, but it is too long
ReplyDeleteIt is a little bit large, but easy to read. I enjoyed the story.
ReplyDeleteI liked this story because is interesting but in my opinion is so long.
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ReplyDeleteIt´s really exciting and easy to read, but I think that´s too long.
ReplyDeleteIt´s really exciting and easy to read, but I think that´s too long.
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ReplyDeleteIt’s a good story and is easy to read it, but a bit long
ReplyDeleteIt’s a good story and is easy to read it, but a bit long
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ReplyDeleteIt´s too exciting and easy to read, but I think that´s too long.
ReplyDeleteIt´s a good story and too interesting but is VERY LONG...
ReplyDeleteIt´s a good story and too interesting but is VERY LONG...
ReplyDeleteIt´s a great story but is a litle bit long.
ReplyDeleteIt´s a great story but is a litle bit long.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoying this story but is too long
ReplyDeleteThe story is ver y interesante but in my opinion is a little bit long
ReplyDeleteThe story is ver y interesante but in my opinion is a little bit long
ReplyDeleteI like this story, but in my opinion is very long
ReplyDeleteI LIKE THE STORIES IS INTERESTING BUT IN MY OPINION IS VERY LONG
ReplyDeleteI don´t like this because is boring
ReplyDeleteI don´t like this because is boring
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ReplyDeletei don´t like the story, in my opinion it's too long, but it's very easy to read
ReplyDeleteI like the story. But it's very long.
ReplyDeleteI like the story but is a bit large
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ReplyDeleteI like the story because is very interesting, but I think that is very long.
ReplyDeleteI like the story, but I think that is a little big long
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ReplyDeleteIts a interesting storie, I like it !!
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ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, it is too long and difficult to understand
ReplyDeleteI think that it is a good story but is very long.
ReplyDeleteI think that it is a good story but is very long.
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ReplyDeleteI like the story because it is very interesting but I think is very long.
ReplyDeleteI like the story because it is very interesting but I think is very long.
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Deleteit is very long
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, it is interesting but is long
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, it is interesting but is long
ReplyDeleteThe story is good but in my opinion is too long
ReplyDeleteI think that is a good story, but difficult to understad and too long
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ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, it is a good story but a little bit long
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, it is a good story but a little bit long
ReplyDeleteI think that is a very good story, is very funny this story but in my opinion is very long
ReplyDeleteI think that the story is very long but i liked.
ReplyDeleteI repeat my last comment saying "i think that the story is original, different that other ones, but i like" but now with the blogger name of Miguel Segurola.
ReplyDeleteThe history is interesting ans y good vecouse you can identificeit with that
ReplyDeleteI recommed because I think is a good story and is easy to readed.
ReplyDeleteIs a good story, I recommended because there are things spleaned that are true
ReplyDelete- Fancied.
- Buzzing.
- Borroved.
I love the love stories but this is very bad
ReplyDeleteIt is very long... but I liked the story it is very interesting and is easy to read
ReplyDeleteIt is very long... but I liked the story it is very interesting and is easy to read
ReplyDeleteThe story is borring, it has too many parragraphs and I don't like it too much.
ReplyDeleteIt's great and easy to read, but is very long.
ReplyDeleteI liked the story, because it was interesting, but it was too long.
ReplyDeleteNew words
-Mop
-Grim
-Switches.
I dont like because the story is very long
ReplyDeleteNew words
rap, fancied, grinned and flatten
I dont like because the story is very long
ReplyDeleteNew words
rap, fancied, grinned and flatten
I like this story because is easy to read, but is very long
ReplyDeleteWORDS:
-MOP
-FANCIED
-GRINNED
-flatten
In my opinion the story is good and easy to read, but is too long
ReplyDeleteNew words:
MOP
GRINNED
In my opinion the story is good and easy to read, but is too long
ReplyDeleteNew words:
MOP
GRINNED
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ReplyDeleteThis story is good and interesting, and is easy to read, however, is too long.
ReplyDeleteNEW WORDS:
Mod, grinned, flatten, fancied and buzzind.
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This story is good and interesting, and is easy to read, however, is too long.
ReplyDeleteNEW WORDS:
Mod, grinned, flatten, fancied and buzzind.
CANDELA LOPEZ
I dont like this story because in my opinion is it not easy to read because is too long.
ReplyDeleteThis story is very interesting but in my opinion is a little bit long.
ReplyDeleteI like the story and it is easy to read but in my opinion is a little bit large.
ReplyDeleteI don't like because this story is very long.
ReplyDeleteI don't like because this stori is very long.
ReplyDeleteI liked this story but on my opinion is so long
ReplyDeleteI didn't like this story
ReplyDeleteIs very bored and very long
I didn't like this story
ReplyDeleteIs very bored and very long
I did not like this story because is quite difficult to understant and is very long:
ReplyDeleteWords:
Skinny
Fancied
Crikcet
I didn`t like this history because is very long
ReplyDeleteI didn`t like this history because is very long
ReplyDeleteI didn't like the story, its very long and boring. Apart, I didn't like the story it is.
ReplyDeleteI didn't like the story, its very long and boring. Apart, I didn't like the story it is.
ReplyDeleteI didn't like this story. It's very long and so boring.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
- Heck
- Jogg
- Whirl
I didnt't like this story because it is so long and boring. But it is easy to read.
ReplyDeleteThe new vocabulary:
- Grinned
- Mop
- Jogg
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ReplyDeleteI liked the story because it is very interesting. But in my opinion, it is too long to read.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
-Grinned
- Jogg
- Flatten
I liked the story because it is very interesting. But in my opinion, it is too long to read.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
-Grinned
- Jogg
- Flatten
I liked the story because it is very interesting. But in my opinion, it is too long to read.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
-Grinned
- Jogg
- Flatten
didnt't like this story because it is so long and boring. But it is easy to read. i recomended for people that like the misterius
ReplyDeleteThe new vocabulary:
- Grinned
- Mop
- Jogg
I think that this story is very very very very very very very boring and i dont learn any new words.
ReplyDeleteI like this, because, is goot friend.
ReplyDelete-unfortunate
-tormenting
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I like this story because i love reading.
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ReplyDeleteI think that this story is very
ReplyDeleteboring and i dont learn any new words.
I think that the story is long but I liked the idea
ReplyDeleteI liked the story, but I think is to long.
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ReplyDeleteI think the story is fine. Maybe too long. I learned new words.
ReplyDeleteI like this story,but it was too long
ReplyDeleteit´s great, but is a bit long
ReplyDeleteI think that this story is
ReplyDeleteboring and I dont learn any new words.
Nice story dear writer :D but i think you write too many stories and u may choose one and try to improve it.
ReplyDeleteIf you like to write storyes u may spend a lot of time writing and doing better stories if u want to be the best...
They are not bad but...
They are short,
But acceptable.
Nice story dear writer :D but i think you write too many stories and u may choose one and try to improve it.
ReplyDeleteIf you like to write storyes u may spend a lot of time writing and doing better stories if u want to be the best...
They are not bad but...
They are short,
But acceptable.
i liked but is soo long
ReplyDeletei liked but is soo long
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, it is too long and difficult to understand but is a interesting history
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ReplyDeleteI like this story because is entertaining and I have not bored reading this story.
ReplyDeleteThe story start describing the situation and that is great, but the part that I like more is the conflict. I like the story because I like how is desarrollated the conflict.
I recommend this sotry to the childrens and teenagers beteween 10-14. That's why I feel identified with Tim
Besides that, I learn news expresions and words in English, for example:(Crankshaft, crackpot, mumps, dizzy...)
i liked this istory but is large but is entertaining
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ReplyDeleteI like this story because is entertaining and I have not bored reading it.
The story starts describing the situation and that is great, but the part that I
like more is the way that author talks about the plot and the characters.
I recommend this story among children and teenagers between 10-14 years
old. That’s because I can identify with Tim
Besides that, I have learnt new expressions and important vocabulary in
English, for example:(Crankshaft, crackpot, mumps, dizzy...)
y don't like the story
ReplyDeleteI like the story but is very long
ReplyDeleteI like the history but i think it is so long and so boring
ReplyDeleteI like this
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ReplyDeleteI REALLY ENJOYDED WHIT THIS STORY IS VERY ITERESTING AND I SCARY A LITTLE BY THE MESSAGE OF THE DR. WOOLLEY
ReplyDeleteNEW WORDS/EXPRESIONS FOR ME:
-most absent-minded person.
-The place was in a mess.
-I yelled.
I REALLY ENJOYDED WHIT THIS STORY IS VERY ITERESTING AND I SCARY A LITTLE BY THE MESSAGE OF THE DR. WOOLLEY
ReplyDeleteNEW WORDS/EXPRESIONS FOR ME:
-most absent-minded person.
-The place was in a mess.
-I yelled.
Goooooooooodddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteVery good!!!!!
ReplyDeleteVERY GOOOD!!
ReplyDeleteI Like it but is so large
ReplyDeleteFancied
A flop
Struggling
The story is very interesting and beautiful.
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A flop
Struggling
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i don´t like the story, in my opinion it's too long, but it's very easy to read
ReplyDeleteI Like it but is so large
ReplyDeleteFancied
A flop
Struggling
i don´t like the story, in my opinion it's too long, but it's very easy to read
ReplyDeleteI liked the history but was very lazy to continue reading but when i finished i liked the story i finally liked
ReplyDeleteIt's a bit large but enjoying.
ReplyDeleteread it it´s easy
ReplyDeleteIt's large, but you enjoy it while you are reading it.
ReplyDeleteIt´s large, but it´s good
ReplyDeleteThe story is too large, but is good. You enjoy it while you're reading it.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
-buzzing
-brooch
-lifeless
I enjoyed the story, but is a little bit large.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
-buzzing
-brooch
-lifeless
you have to rea ths story is very easy to read and exciting
ReplyDeleteit a little large but the story is god
ReplyDeleteyou enjoy it while you are reading it. The story is so large, but is good.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
-buzzing
-brooch
-lifeless
you enjoy it while you are reading it. The story is so large, but is good.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
-buzzing
-brooch
-lifeless
i have read the story and it is very interesting but is a bit large so it is like more difficult to read it but i recommend you to read his story because this doesn't happen only in this case there are a lot of more cases but this is very hard.
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ReplyDelete-brooch
-lifeless
I read the story and is so interesting but is a little long
ReplyDeleteThe story was very well but was very long.
ReplyDeleteits too long to read , but the story is ok.In my opinion is interesting.
ReplyDeleteIt's very long, but is a interesting story
ReplyDeleteThe story it's so long, but it's very interesing and entretaining
ReplyDeleteIt's very long, but it's interesting
ReplyDeleteis long but easy to read . Its a good sotory
ReplyDeleteIt is a hard history. NICO
ReplyDeleteThe history is well but the history is long
ReplyDeleteIt is too long in my opinion, but it gives lots of details and that make very interesting the time you're reading it. I enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteNew words: grinned, gnomish, grubby
I enjoyed the story, but is a little bit large.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this history, is very large,but is very interesting toó.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
Grinned, gnomish, grubby.
I like this type of book but this in particular not too much
ReplyDeleteIt was very entertaining, and I enjoy it a lot.
ReplyDeleteNEW WORDS:
Curtains; mumps; grim.
Its very good story, I like it
ReplyDeleteSome of the words I didn't hear were fancied, footy, and shop front
ReplyDeleteSome of the words I didn't hear were fancied, footy, and shop front
ReplyDeletei like this type of historys
ReplyDeletetries to, to shake
DeleteIt is large But I like this story, it is vey intense and the story is interestig
ReplyDeleteits large but i liked this story is very interesting
ReplyDeleteIt’s a good story and is easy to read it, but a bit long
ReplyDeleteits large but i liked this story is very interesting
ReplyDelete(Unax Peñalver)
The story is very good but is very long.
ReplyDeleteRead it, is a good history and is easy to read.
ReplyDeleteIt is good and interesting but is a little long to read, 7 pages is a lot!
ReplyDelete- Grinned
- Mop
- buzzing
Is very interesting. It is a little bit long, but easy to read.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
grinned
lifeless
fancied
I like the history because can be a real situation but is little bit long.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
Fink
Heck
Handle
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DeleteThe story is good and easy to read but is very large.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
Heck
Fancied
Fink
I enjoyed the story, but is very large.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
Fink
Mop
Fanciend
I liked this story but on my opinion is so long
ReplyDeleteVery long but is good
ReplyDeleteincredible,amazing!
ReplyDeleteIt's a little bit boring and too long.
ReplyDeleteThe story it is good but it is very long
ReplyDeleteOne 1000000000 for this writter.
ReplyDeleteThis story is quite good but it is too large.
ReplyDeleteI recomended this story for teenagers and childs.
ReplyDeleteAH_Izurdeak I recomended this story for teenagers and childs. ( I writed too times but one I dont put the name)
ReplyDeleteThis story is quite good but it is too large.( I writed too times but one I dont put the name)
I like the story a lot!
i like it, but i think that is very long
ReplyDeleteIs very interesnt, so, I like it.
ReplyDeleteI like this story because it remember me to my cousins
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